1. Health

Discuss in my forum

Nancy Schimelpfening

Member Poetry: "The Ride"

By , About.com GuideJune 7, 2006

Follow me on:

My life has been a roller coaster, up and down I ride.
In between the peaks and valleys, I find nowhere to hide,
They say life is just a lesson - I thought I already learned,
Till another day begins and I realize I've been burned.
There's time for you and him and them and never none for me,
Once again, with blinders on, the Reality I didn't see,
The coaster goes so fast at times and others, slow as hell,
But there's safety and protection Inside that cold, steel shell.
I wear a smile and slowly die inside,
As I continue on this
    roller
      coaster
        ride.
      --Dar
Comments
June 7, 2006 at 12:19 pm
(1) depression says:

Dar, thanks for submitting this! I felt like this really summed up how I felt for many years.

June 9, 2006 at 9:12 pm
(2) D says:

HOW DID YOU GET INSIDE ME? NOW I KNOW IM NOT ALONE. I JUST WISH I COULD FEEL IT.

June 26, 2006 at 7:05 pm
(3) K says:

I loved this poem… thank you for that beautiful summery of my life…

December 28, 2008 at 1:32 pm
(4) jason says:

I have the same issues related to memory loss and loss of concentration, do you know any alternative..

September 18, 2011 at 8:50 pm
(5) Susan says:

Thankyou for describing how I have felt all my life…

Leave a Comment

Line and paragraph breaks are automatic. Some HTML allowed: <a href="" title="">, <b>, <i>, <strike>
Related Searches poetry

©2012 About.com. All rights reserved.

A part of The New York Times Company.

We comply with the HONcode standard
for trustworthy health
information: verify here.